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On Saturday he had finished eating through revision, contributing knowledge, research genre production, information literacy, multiple ways of writing, and generating inquiry.

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For each major writing assignment, we had a set of peer-reviewed drafts before our final draft. The comments differed between each assignment, and sometimes it was helpful, but sometimes I knew where I wanted to take my work. 

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The comments from my professor are the most helpful because they usually critique my format or organization, and it helps, but some comments I have also disregarded because I knew what I wanted to do with my essay going forward. The good work comments were always encouraging!

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After a whole semester of revision, work, peer reviews, instructor feedback, and research, I finally completed my final research paper. Each piece of major work we did in class helped to contribute to the whole, and the feedback I got along the way significantly affected the way I wrote. To complete this essay, I had to consider the feedback I was given, decide which of it to change and which to keep, and continue to improve as a writer. The constructive criticism I received were things that allowed me to reflect and grow. 

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Now he wasn't hungry anymore- and he wasn't a little caterpillar anymore. He was a big, fat caterpillar full of the ENC1102 Outcomes.

THE END :)

REVISION

SATURDAY

Students will be able to negotiate differences in and act with intention on feedback from readers when drafting, revising, and editing their writing.

ENC1102 EPORTFOLIO

anna phillips

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